是用If造的句子是吧？首先你的句子里有很多错误的单词，也许是你手打的原因，你的句子我给改了一下，你看看：1.I will resign immediately and then go around the world with my wife, read the books I want and like and have known, which are very amazing ,interesting and fascinatic but I never read.

2.If you study hard enough, you will be admitted by one of the best universities and get a well-paid job.

我觉得没必要用那么多的of，有些形容词直接放到名词前面读起来反而更顺，用太多的介词容易把自己把读者都弄糊涂了。