I am the monitor of our classes. Serveral days ago, I helped my teacher arrange the class trip to a scuplture park. We visited the sculpture park before the trip to note anything that may cause accidents. By doing so, my teacher and I knew what to expect and felt fully prepared.There were 40 students took the trip. My teacher and I devided them into groups of four, each group having one student in charge. The trip was really great-everyone came back happy and excited. Although tired, I felt very proud of that.

visit--> visited 过去发生的，应为过去时

what--> that 已有anything就不应该用what

full--> fully 修饰prepared，应使用副词

was--> were 学生可数名词，应用复数

take--> took 过去时，应使用过去分词

devided them groups.. --> devided them into devide...into... 固定搭配，把..分成..

were--> was trip 为单数

exciting--> excited excited形容人，exciting形容东西。这里指学生，所以永excited

but--> 去掉 although和but不能一起用。只能单独用

proud--> proud of pround of ... 固定搭配，对...感到自豪